A list of opinions becomes a paragraph when you pick one as the main idea and arrange the others to support it. You keep your own sentences and add the links.
This lesson is part of revising an English response without replacing the student voice. It uses the idea, example and effect pattern from supporting ideas with relevant examples.
Which opinion becomes the main idea?
Ask three questions. Which opinion answers the task most directly? Which one can I back with an example? Which one do the others connect to?
The opinion that passes all three becomes your topic sentence. The rest support it, belong to a second paragraph, or are cut.
Worked example: phones in school
Task: write a paragraph for the school magazine on whether students should use phones in school. The student’s first draft is a list.
“Phones are bad in school. They distract students. They can be expensive and get lost.”
“Some students use them for homework. Teachers get angry.”
The draft has five short statements, but they point in different directions. Some say phones are bad, one says they are useful for homework, and one is about cost.
Choosing the main idea. The sentence “They distract students” answers the task most directly and can be shown with an example. Make it the topic sentence.
Keeping what supports it. “Teachers get angry” supports the distraction point. “Some students use them for homework” goes against it, so it can become a contrast. “Expensive and get lost” belongs in a different paragraph.
Rebuilt paragraph. “Phones should not be used freely in school because they distract students. During a lesson, one notification can pull a student away from the teacher’s explanation, and the teacher must then stop and repeat it.”
“Some students do use phones for homework research. However, the school library computers can serve the same purpose without the distraction.”
The writer’s plain wording stays. The revision only adds a topic sentence, an example and a contrast link.
The mistake that loses marks
The common slip is to keep every opinion and join them with “also”. The paragraph grows but has no centre, and the reader sees five claims and no argument.
Let one idea lead, and keep the others only if they support it.
Check yourself
Turn this list into a paragraph: “Homework is too much. Students are tired. I sleep late. Teachers should give less.” Choose a main idea and write three sentences.
Answer
Main idea: “Students should receive less homework because it cuts into their sleep.”
Support: “A student who finishes homework at midnight has little time to rest before school.”
Conclusion: “If teachers gave less, students would arrive more awake and ready to learn.”
“Homework is too much” and “I sleep late” support the main idea, and “Students are tired” becomes the effect.
What to study next
Move on to editing an informal phrase for a specified audience without over-formalising. Check your paragraph against the English writing task checklist.
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