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Writing a report with clear findings

You have the figures for a report, but they read like a list of numbers.

A report has a fixed order: purpose, findings, recommendation. Findings are facts, grouped and stated with figures, and the recommendation follows from them.

This lesson belongs to extended writing. Clear figures also matter in information transfer, where meaning must not change.

What are the parts of a report?

  • Title and purpose: one line saying what the report is about and why.
  • Findings: grouped facts, with headings if useful.
  • Recommendation: one or two actions based on the findings.

Worked example: homework time

This is a worked example. A class monitor asked 40 students how long they spent on homework on a weekday.

Time spent Students
Under one hour 18
One to two hours 15
More than two hours 7

The totals add up: 18 + 15 + 7 = 40.

Purpose. “This report shows how long Form 4 Amanah students spend on homework on weekdays.”

Findings. “Most students spend two hours or less. Eighteen of the 40 students reported less than one hour, and 15 reported one to two hours. Seven students spend more than two hours, which is the smallest group.”

Recommendation. “Teachers of the seven students who spend more than two hours could check whether the tasks are the right length.”

The findings state the figures, group them and say what stands out. The recommendation follows directly from one finding and does not claim more than the data supports.

The mistake: listing numbers without a point

A student writes “18 students said under one hour, 15 said one to two hours, 7 said more than two hours” and stops. The figures are correct, but the reader must do the thinking.

Weak Strong
Lists three numbers Says most spend two hours or less
No total “18 of the 40 students”
No recommendation One action linked to the smallest group

After each group of figures, add one sentence that answers “so what?”.

Check yourself

A questionnaire asked 30 students how they travel to school: 12 by bus, 10 by car, 8 on foot. Write a one-sentence finding and one recommendation.

Answer

Check: 12 + 10 + 8 = 30.

Finding: “Bus is the most common way to travel, used by 12 of the 30 students, followed by car (10) and walking (8).”

Recommendation: “The school could ask the bus operator about pick-up times, since the bus carries the largest group.”

What to study next

Continue with developing a story with controlled pacing, which is a very different genre. If you want to test your choice of genre, see comparing writing genres before choosing a task.

The graph evidence and fair-comparison lab helps when a task includes a chart. For a teacher to read your reports, see online one-to-one English tuition.

Common questions

What is the difference between a report and an essay?

A report presents information for a reader who needs to act or decide. It uses headings, short paragraphs and clear findings. An essay develops an argument in connected paragraphs. A report is organised for scanning, an essay for reading through.

What are findings?

Findings are the facts the report discovered, stated plainly with figures where possible. They are separate from recommendations, which say what to do next. Keep the two apart.

How should I present figures?

State the figure with the total, such as 18 of the 40 students, so the reader sees the size of the group. Group similar results, and say what the figures show in one sentence.

What tone does a report use?

Formal, neutral and direct. Avoid slang and strong personal feelings. Use the passive voice only where it keeps the writing clear.

If your reports list figures without saying what they mean, one-to-one English lessons let a teacher show you how to group findings and write the one sentence that turns numbers into a point.

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