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Plan a concise passage-based answer

You know the passage, but your answer starts writing before you know where it is going.

A plan for a passage-based answer has three parts: the point that answers the question, the evidence from the passage, and the explanation that links them. You can write it in thirty seconds.

This lesson sits in answer construction and recall, part of the SPM Bible Knowledge learning guide. The passage below is original and written for practice, not a prescribed text.

The original passage

“The gatekeeper would not open the gate after dark. Yet when the late traveller shivered outside, the gatekeeper passed a blanket through the window and told him to wait until morning.”

The question

“Explain one way the gatekeeper showed care for the traveller.” Suppose this is worth 3 marks, as an example of a short-answer question.

Step 1: find the question’s task

The verbs matter. “Explain” means give a reason, not only a fact. “One way” means choose one and develop it, not list several.

Step 2: write the three-part plan

Part Notes
Point He gave the traveller a blanket
Evidence “passed a blanket through the window”
Explanation The traveller was cold, so the blanket met a real need even though the gate stayed shut

The plan is short enough to jot in the margin, and complete enough to write from.

Step 3: write the answer

“The gatekeeper showed care by giving the traveller a blanket. The passage says he ‘passed a blanket through the window’ when the traveller shivered. This met the traveller’s need for warmth even though the gate stayed closed.”

Each sentence comes from one row of the plan. The answer is three sentences, and it is easy to check.

What goes wrong without a plan

An unplanned answer often starts well and then wanders: “The gatekeeper was a strict man who kept the gate closed, and the traveller was late, and it was dark, so he gave him a blanket.”

Feature Unplanned Planned
First sentence Describes the gatekeeper States the point that answers the question
Evidence Mixed into the story Quoted in one clear phrase
Explanation Missing Links blanket to need

The unplanned version contains the same facts. It loses marks because the facts are not arranged to answer the question.

Check yourself

Use the same passage to plan an answer to: “Explain one way the gatekeeper kept to his duty.” Write the three-part plan only.

Answer

Point. He kept the gate closed after dark.

Evidence. “would not open the gate after dark”.

Explanation. He followed his responsibility even when the traveller was in need, so he did not break the rule; he helped in another way.

Notice that the same passage supports a different point for a different question. A good plan always starts from the question, not from the passage.

What to study next

Go on to improving an answer that retells events without answering the question. Then test the plan habit on the answer construction practice set.

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Common questions

How long should planning take in an exam?

A short plan can take under a minute for a short-answer question. Jot three short notes: the point, the evidence and the link. A longer question needs a slightly longer plan, but the same three parts.

Do I write the plan on the paper?

Use the margin or rough space if your paper instructions allow it. Follow the rules for your paper and ask your school about what is allowed.

What if the question has two parts?

Plan each part as its own point, evidence and explanation. Label them so you do not merge the two parts into one long paragraph.

How is a plan different from a draft?

A plan is three short notes. A draft is full sentences. Planning first means the draft has one job only: to put the notes into clear words.

In one-to-one lessons a teacher can time your planning, read the plan before you write, and show you early where the answer would have drifted.

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