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Understanding your child's BM writing problem

Your child speaks Malay well, yet the teacher's comments on writing make little sense to you.

A parent does not need to read BM fluently to help. It is enough to understand what three or four common comments mean and to ask the child questions that lead back to the question on the paper.

This page belongs to the SPM Bahasa Melayu guide. For conversations about marks, see how to discuss a low mark without starting an argument.

What does the parent usually say?

“Dia pandai bercakap BM, tetapi karangannya tidak mendapat markah tinggi.” Or: “Cikgu menulis komen di kertas, tetapi saya tidak faham maksudnya.”

What do teacher comments point to?

This marked sentence is original, written to show the idea.

Dia orang selalu pergi ke perpustakaan sebab nak baca buku tu. (Cikgu: bahasa tidak baku; ayat tidak lengkap)

Comment What it points to What to ask your child
Bahasa tidak baku Informal words such as “dia orang”, “sebab”, “nak” “Apakah bentuk baku bagi perkataan ini?”
Isi tidak berkaitan A paragraph that does not answer the question “Bahagian soalan manakah yang dijawab oleh perenggan ini?”
Huraian kurang A point that is stated but not explained “Bagaimanakah isi ini berlaku?”
Ayat tidak lengkap A missing subject or predicate “Siapa atau apa yang melakukan perbuatan itu?”

For the sample sentence, a standard version is: Mereka selalu pergi ke perpustakaan kerana ingin membaca buku itu. Each change has a reason, and your child can explain it.

What might be behind a writing difficulty?

The cause can differ between students. These are possibilities, not diagnoses.

  • Register. Everyday Malay carries into the written answer.
  • Relevance. Good paragraphs answer a different question from the one asked.
  • Development. Points are named but not explained.
  • Sentence control. Long sentences lose their subject or verb.

A teacher who reads several pieces together can usually tell which one stands out. A parent can look for a pattern across three or four marked pieces.

What can I do as a parent?

  • Ask the child to read a paragraph aloud, then ask what question it answers.
  • Collect marked pieces and mark the repeated comments with a highlighter.
  • Ask the child to correct one sentence a day and explain the change to you.
  • Avoid rewriting the work yourself. The child learns from doing the correction.
  • Use the mistake log and paper-error review together to track repeated comments.

When might one-to-one tuition help?

If the same comments appear across several pieces and your child has tried to fix them, a one-to-one teacher can read the writing with the child and sort the comments into patterns. The page on choosing a useful lesson focus helps you prepare.

The one-hour trial class (from RM50) suits this well if you bring two marked answers. The fee is agreed before the trial, and afterwards you decide whether the teacher is a good fit. Learn more at online one-to-one SPM Bahasa Melayu tuition, or read how to decide which subject needs help first.

Common questions

My child speaks BM well. Why is the writing weak?

Speech and exam writing use different registers. Everyday Malay has informal words and shortened forms that the exam does not accept, and writing also needs complete sentences and clear links. Fluent speech and formal writing are separate skills.

What do comments like 'isi tidak berkaitan' mean?

They usually mean a paragraph does not answer the question, even when the language is fine. Ask the child to point to the word in the question that the paragraph answers. If they cannot, the paragraph is off task.

Should I rewrite my child's essays?

It is better to ask questions than to rewrite. Ask, 'Apakah soalan yang dijawab oleh perenggan ini?' The child learns to check relevance, and the work stays the child's own.

How can I tell whether tuition would help?

If the same comments return on several pieces of work after your child has tried to fix them, a teacher who reads the writing with the child may help. Compare a few marked pieces before deciding.

If you want to understand what your child's writing needs before deciding on tuition, the one-hour trial class (from RM50) lets you see a teacher read your child's own work. Bring one or two marked answers.

  • Online one-to-one lessons for your child with an experienced teacher.
  • Your first class is a one-hour trial, from RM50. The fee is agreed before you book.
  • Happy with the teacher? Continue with lessons of about 1.5 hours. If not, ask for another teacher.