An objective says what a measure was meant to do, while an evidenced outcome says what a source reports it did. Only the second can show that a measure worked.
This lesson follows connecting education, language and community measures. Having linked the aims, you now check them against the evidence.
What is the two-column test?
Draw two columns, Aim and Result. Place each line of the source in one of them.
- Words like “aimed to”, “hoped to” or “in order to” go under Aim.
- Numbers, records and described changes go under Result.
If the Result column is empty, the source does not show that the measure worked.
Worked example: the New Economic Policy
The following passage is adapted from published information and written in our own words 1 2.
“The New Economic Policy, which ran from 1971 to 1990, aimed to eradicate poverty in all communities and to break the link between ethnicity and economic role. It set a target of raising Bumiputera ownership of corporate equity from 2.4% in 1970 to 30% by 1990. By 2012 the share was about 21%. Some writers say the policy was a great success.”
Question: Did the policy achieve its aims? Use the source.
| Aim | Result |
|---|---|
| Eradicate poverty in all communities | Overall poverty fell from 49.3% in 1970 to 16.5% in 1990 |
| Raise Bumiputera equity from 2.4% to 30% | About 21% in 2012 |
| “Some writers say it was a great success” |
The figures are evidence, although the source does not give the share in 1990 itself. The comment that it was a great success is an opinion: it is a view, not a measured change.
A balanced answer: “The policy aimed to raise Bumiputera equity from 2.4% to 30%. By 2012 the share had reached about 21%, which is higher than in 1970 but below the target, although the source does not give the 1990 figure. Poverty also fell from 49.3% to 16.5% between 1970 and 1990, so one aim was partly achieved. The view that the policy was a great success is an opinion, so it does not prove the aims were met.”
Your textbook may give other figures, so check the details there.
The mistake that loses marks
The common slip is to write “The NEP solved inequality.” The source shows a rise to about 21%, not the 30% target, and it does not say inequality was solved.
| Claim | Supported by the source? |
|---|---|
| “Bumiputera ownership of corporate equity rose to about 21% by 2012” | Yes |
| “The NEP solved inequality” | Not shown |
The fix is to keep your claim the same size as the evidence: write “partly met”, not “solved”.
A routine for any unity source
- Sort each line into Aim or Result.
- For each Result, ask whether it is a record or an opinion.
- Write the aim, then the evidenced result, then one limit of the evidence.
- Use “partly” or “suggests” when the evidence covers only one part.
The mistake log and paper-error review lets you record each time you claimed more than the source shows.
Check yourself
Source, adapted: “The Rukun Negara was proclaimed on 31 August 1970 and aimed at closer unity among the whole community. Many people have praised it as a perfect solution.” State the aim, whether the source gives an evidenced outcome, and one limit.
Answer
Aim: to achieve closer unity among the whole community. Evidenced outcome: the source gives none, because it only reports a proclamation and praise. Limit: “a perfect solution” is an opinion, and to judge the outcome you would need a record of change after 1970.
What to study next
Test the whole cluster with the practice set on national wellbeing and unity. For the same habit across other topics, read using evidence in KBAT responses.
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