An action in a story always has a reason behind it, and the question usually asks for that reason. This lesson gives a four-step chain from the action to the trait it shows.
It opens the cluster on literary comprehension. The next lesson is separating theme, issue, value and lesson.
What is the four-step chain?
Work through the steps in order and write one short line for each.
- Action: what the character does.
- Motive: why they do it in this moment.
- Evidence: a short quotation or detail that supports the motive.
- Trait: the lasting quality the action shows.
Worked example: an original extract
The extract is original.
Pak Hamid membuka pintu pondok lamanya. Tangannya menggeletar ketika menyambut kunci daripada anak muda itu. “Terima kasih, nak,” katanya perlahan, lalu menoleh ke arah pokok rambutan yang ditanamnya dahulu.
Question: Why does Pak Hamid look at the rambutan tree?
| Step | Answer |
|---|---|
| Action | He turns to look at the tree after handing over the key |
| Motive | The tree reminds him of the years he lived there and he is sad to leave |
| Evidence | “yang ditanamnya dahulu” (the tree he planted long ago) |
| Trait | Sentimental, attached to his home |
The written answer reads: “Pak Hamid looks at the tree because it holds his memories of the house. The phrase ‘yang ditanamnya dahulu’ shows he planted it himself, which suggests he is sentimental and sad to leave.”
The mistake that costs marks
The slip is to retell: “Pak Hamid menoleh ke arah pokok rambutan selepas memberikan kunci.” It is accurate, but it says nothing the extract does not already say.
A retelling answers the question what happened. The question asked why. The motive step is the one that turns a retelling into an explanation.
Check yourself
Use the four steps to answer the question.
Fatimah menyimpan surat itu ke dalam poket sebelum menjawab panggilan ibunya. “Tiada apa-apa,” katanya sambil tersenyum.
Question: Why does Fatimah hide the letter?
Answer
Action: she puts the letter in her pocket before answering her mother.
Motive: she does not want her mother to know about the letter, perhaps to avoid worrying her.
Evidence: “Tiada apa-apa” (nothing is wrong), said with a smile that covers the truth.
Trait: secretive, or protective of her mother.
A full answer: “Fatimah hides the letter because she does not want her mother to worry. Her reply ‘Tiada apa-apa’ and her smile show she is covering the truth, which suggests she is protective.”
What to study next
Go on to separating theme, issue, value and lesson. Practise the chain with the claim and evidence revision desk, and log answers that only retell in the mistake log and paper-error review.
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