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Language editing: practice with answers

You have read the language editing lessons and want fresh sentences to correct.

These eight questions are original. They start with single corrections and end with a short passage, so write your own answer before you open each one.

The lessons are in language editing. To attempt the set against a clock, use the timed original practice session builder.

Questions 1 to 4: find and fix

Question 1. Correct the error: Beberapa murid-murid sudah tiba di dewan.

Answer

“Beberapa” already means more than one, so repeating “murid” doubles the plural. The correction is Beberapa murid sudah tiba di dewan.

Question 2. Correct the error: Walaupun penat, tetapi Aina menyiapkan kerjanya.

Answer

“Walaupun” and “tetapi” both signal contrast, so one of them is extra. Remove “tetapi”: Walaupun penat, Aina menyiapkan kerjanya.

Question 3. Correct the spelling and capitalisation: Kami mengunjungi muzium negara pada hari selasa.

Answer

“Muzium Negara” is a proper name, so both words take capitals. “Selasa” is a day of the week and also takes a capital. The result is Kami mengunjungi Muzium Negara pada hari Selasa.

“Mengunjungi” is already correct and stays.

Question 4. Correct the punctuation: Emak membeli beras, gula dan, garam.

Answer

A comma does not follow “dan” in a list. The correction is Emak membeli beras, gula dan garam.

Questions 5 to 8: explain, judge and edit a passage

Question 5. Correct this sentence and explain the change in one sentence: Novel itu sudah dibaca oleh kami.

Answer

The corrected sentence is Novel itu sudah kami baca.

The explanation: the doer is “kami”, a first-person pronoun, so the passive puts the pronoun before the bare verb and drops “di-” and “oleh”.

Question 6. Is this sentence an error or an acceptable choice? Gelap gelita bilik itu.

Answer

It is an acceptable choice. The descriptive phrase comes first for effect, no grammar rule is broken and the meaning is clear. Leave it alone.

Question 7. A student changed Kami bermalam di rumah nenek. to Kami menginap di kediaman nenek kami. Was this a correction?

Answer

No. The original sentence was correct, and the new one only swaps words the student preferred. That is a rewrite, not a correction.

The extra “kami” also repeats a pronoun the sentence did not need. When no rule is broken, the original stays.

Question 8. Correct the three errors and give a short reason for each.

Pada hari jumaat, Encik Razak pergi ke pejabat pos. dia membeli beberapa setem-setem untuk dihantar kepada anak-anaknya.

Answer
  1. “jumaat” becomes Jumaat, because days of the week take a capital letter.
  2. “dia” becomes Dia, because a new sentence begins with a capital letter.
  3. “beberapa setem-setem” becomes beberapa setem, because “beberapa” already marks more than one.

“anak-anaknya” stays as written.

If you got these wrong

In online one-to-one Bahasa Melayu tuition, a teacher can read your working and point to the rule you are missing.

Common questions

How should I attempt these questions?

Cover the answers and write your corrections on paper. Then open each answer and mark every change you made without a rule behind it. Redo the question the next day from the original sentence.

Are these past-year SPM questions?

No. Every sentence is original and written for practice, so there is no link to any real paper. They follow the skills taught in the lessons and do not predict a future paper.

What if I get most of them wrong?

Return to the lesson for the question type and retry only those questions. A repeated pattern, such as missing a doubled word form, usually points to one habit you can train.

If you keep getting the same kind of question wrong, a one-to-one BM teacher can read your corrections and show the rule you are missing. Tell us which questions went wrong.

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